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Maren Muter

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Examples of Segues

Emotional Link:

  • Scene 1: “She watched the candle burn out, feeling the weight of her decision settle over her.”

  • Segue: “By the time the dawn broke, the letter had already been sent.”

Time Jump:

  • Scene 1: “The ship vanished into the horizon, leaving him alone on the shore.”

  • Segue: “Months later, the tide brought the first piece of wreckage.”

Thematic Shift:

  • Scene 1: “The garden was alive with laughter and sunlight.”

  • Segue: “But even gardens have shadows, and his would come to grow.”


As we go along, we will see segues are usually very tight, lasting from 1 sentence to a paragraph or a form of dialog.

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The services rendered by Maren Muter are held out to the public as a form of motivational coaching combined with instruction in meditation. Maren does not represent her services as any form of medical health care or direct psychotherapy, and despite research to the contrary, by law she may make no health benefit claims for her services.

If you are suffering and have thoughts of imminently hurting yourself,

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